Ok, people have wanted to hear my poetry, so here is just a little warmup, just some fluff for you to enjoy before I get to the serious stuff:
You are familiar with the color of roses,
and certainly that of violets.
So I will not denigrate my feelings,
by making a superfluous analogy that could never begin to illustrate the eroticism I feel, towards you.
ctk, 12/08, USA
4 comments:
Anonymous
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It's total crap. In fact, I could shit a better poem that this pile. Just kidding - it's fucking awesome! I read this to the wife and she practically jumped me right there in the goddamn Burger King. Goddamnit.
4 comments:
It's total crap. In fact, I could shit a better poem that this pile. Just kidding - it's fucking awesome! I read this to the wife and she practically jumped me right there in the goddamn Burger King. Goddamnit.
Christ the King?
wow!! that is good perfect use of the word 'eroticism'
I like the comma between feel and towards. Perfect.
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